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I agree, this is well done.
A few remarks, if I may in the spirit of helpfulness, so that your next work may be even better (though, looking through your gallery, I can see you are already quite accomplished).
Use of haze in such a small space is perhaps not the best idea. It gives the impression the room is filled with smoke. Hazy view out the windows is fine.
Distortion of the ceiling lamp at the upper right suggests need for some correction in the basic setup. Distortion disappears if I bring my eye within a few centimeters of the screen.
In an indoor scene there are often multiple light sources -- lamps, windows, etc. -- and one can usually tell where the light is coming from, and that has a strong effect on the mood of the scene. In this scene, the opposite is true. There is diffuse light everywhere, but no source for it.
A few remarks, if I may in the spirit of helpfulness, so that your next work may be even better (though, looking through your gallery, I can see you are already quite accomplished).
Use of haze in such a small space is perhaps not the best idea. It gives the impression the room is filled with smoke. Hazy view out the windows is fine.
Distortion of the ceiling lamp at the upper right suggests need for some correction in the basic setup. Distortion disappears if I bring my eye within a few centimeters of the screen.
In an indoor scene there are often multiple light sources -- lamps, windows, etc. -- and one can usually tell where the light is coming from, and that has a strong effect on the mood of the scene. In this scene, the opposite is true. There is diffuse light everywhere, but no source for it.